I think that smoking should be band in British Columbia and I am going to tell you why. Thousands of people smoke either because they think it is cool, or they got addicted to it. The people that got addicted to it, a lot of them don't want to smoke but can't quit. If smoking was not aloud people, would not have to worry about getting addicted to smoking. If you go for walk, you always see people smoking and you are not suppose to breath in the smoke, it is really bad for you. If there was no smoking cigarettes wouldn't be lying on over the ground. When you think about it if you went for a fifteen minute walk, you would probably walk by around a thousands cigarettes. Now that is not a good thing.
Cigarettes have so many bad things in them that I cant even name them all, here is a few things that they do to you, they make your teeth turn black well actually your whole mouth, its makes you so lazy and it makes you stink. Do you want all those things to happen to you one day. I had to think about this what would happen if the people that loved smoking got it took away. Well that would not be good. It would start so many fight and lots of jobs would go out of buisness. That might not happen though because it is only band in B.C. and every were else is aloud.
Anyways what i am trying to say to you would be, don't smoke, what good comes to that. Think about it.
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I reeally like your idea. I like how you made your statement really clear. Their is a problem becuse if you band smoking right now the people that all ready are addicted to smoking will start getting desperate and bad things might start happening. Over all it was Great! =D.
ReplyDeletevery good i like how wrote the i liked some of the facts you put in there and i kinda agree with poppy but yeh it was good
ReplyDeleteVery good. I hope that is band in british colombia. Heh. I love your idea it is good, you have some facts. But you have some spelling mistakes( only 1 or 2 actually). Smoking is'nt cool!!
ReplyDeletei think that smoking is for idots beacuse it ruin's your lungs but poppy is right they have already become addicted and many busness will go out of bissness. but you could replace cigarte's with somthing that gives the same affect so they can get un addicted then in a couple of years we band that and we save many lives. but that means there will be a new tobaco drug ring and trade.
ReplyDeletewow , that was an amazing blog. It was one of the best i've read. I really liked it alot. You gave alot of facts. Maybe you could put a hook at the begining.
ReplyDeleteGood stories and sentence structure. Yah, you do have one or two spelling errors.
ReplyDeleteMy mom smokes, but she is quitting this winter.
lilly sadly thats wat they all say and winter will turn into spring spring will turn into next year and so on i sorry
ReplyDeletei like it alot but The government would lose lots of tax dollars and that would impact us alot!
ReplyDeleteAgreed with rainbow platyous Xtreme :D
ReplyDeleteIf they were to take out smoking alot of people would get mad because its like impossible to quit, and the goverment would lose LOTS of money :D
ya but that doesnt matter becacause i am writing about what would happen if we took away smoking. i am talking about the good things not the bad things!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
ReplyDeletein my story i said if we banded smoking on british columbia not the whole world so those smokers can smoke somewhere else so it will not cause any problems!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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